1, Topic: side. . . . . Side. . . . .
children: his clothes off one side, while pants.
teacher comment is: he in the end is to de ah? or wear ah?
2, Topic: which
children: I One of them left foot hurt.
teacher comment is: Are you a centipede it?
3, topic: they gradually
children: work, my father's home land after another.
teacher comment is: in the end you have a few father ah?
4, topic: sad
children: Article ditch the front of my home very sad.
teacher comment is: the teacher is more upset
5, topic: also. . . Another. . .
children: my mother short and tall, fat and thin.
teacher comment is: your mom
distorted magic it?
6, subject; you see
children: Do you see what look! never seen ah?
teacher reviews: Do not get pulled
7, subject; thriving
children write: thriving Wing confession.
teacher reviews: series do not look too much!
8, entitled: delicious
children write: delicious ass.
teacher reviews: do not eat, stood
9. Title: naive
children write: really hot today.
teacher reviews: You're naive
10. Topic: really
children wrote: Yesterday I ate fruit. and then He Liangshui
teacher reviews: a phrase, not separate
11. Title: First. . . . Again. . . Example: first eat, then take a bath..
children: Sir, good-bye!
teacher reviews:. . . . . .
12. Topic: What
children: a train through, What What What What
teacher comment is: I would just die
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